How does this part of my story sound? Be as rough as you want!!!!!!?
Q. Okay, my story is a fantasy one. This part is like the very beginning, before chapter one. It is about a girl named Sakura who has magical powers of fire. In this part it is basically the last part where she is so cold her powers are fading. I'm a young kid, so my grammar isn't the best in the world. Please tell me if you would read it and if I can do anything better, make things clearer, add adjectives, I'm under 16 so my writing isn't the best. --- I sat the in the pouring rain on the top of the uneven mountain, my mountain, my home. Sky and Destiny franticly scrambling looking for relatively dry wood, or something to start a fire. It wouldn t be a problem if i weren t losing all my powers! Susan kept on shouting franticly, Come on!… [cont.]
Asked by Medowwood Umm..Dasher..Uh.Thingy - Sun Jun 21 11:19:12 2009 - - 5 Answers - 0 Comments

A. I like it A LOT! It's so descriptive and great! I can just imagine it. I love the topic and the details. I think you have a talent. The only thing I would change is. . . NOTHING. Nvm. Lol. Try my Q?
Answered by Team Taylor - Sun Jun 21 11:28:01 2009

What about SUSAN BOYLE?
Q. Wasnt that a well deserved smack in the eyes fo the judges and the smirking audience . ..Power to your elbow my love .Hurry up and make a CD for us to enjoy over and over again
Asked by Don c - Wed Apr 22 18:17:22 2009 - - 3 Answers - 0 Comments

A. I think it's the fact that there are some uglya$$ men out there who sing and are famous in every other area of entertainment, but all famous women are expected to be beautiful. Now you have a woman who is plain as the day is long and all of a sudden everyone is like, "WOW, a plain woman can be amazing". It just shows how SICK and twisted our society has become. The woman is brilliant but all everyone wants to talk about is about her looks or lack of social skills. There are plenty of men who are the same way making MILLIONS. >>>
Answered by goaheadnfireme - Sun Apr 26 08:46:45 2009

HELP! how would I site this source as a footnote or endnote?
Q. Mohamed Kably wrote the essay Legitimacy of State Power and Socioreligious Variations in Medieval Morocco, which appeared on pages 17-29 of the book In the Shadow of the Sultan, edited by Rahma Bourqia and Susan Gilson Miller. Harvard University Press (Cambridge, Massachusetts) published In the Shadow of the Sultan in 1999. The subtitle of the book is Culture, Power, and Politics in Morocco. How should I cite the entirety of Kably s essay from this book?
Asked by remomy1 - Mon Jul 7 21:31:06 2008 - - 3 Answers - 0 Comments